Wednesday, October 26, 2011

Is it me or you?

Sometimes I wait for love,
But you never turned back.

Sometimes I give you love,
But you dint speak my language.

Sometimes I tried to be myself,
But you felt I was not right.

Sometimes I wait for you to approve,
But you just accept it.

Sometimes you have taken away what I deserved,
But you never cared for its significance.

Who is it?
Is it me or you?

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12 comments:

  1. KPOctober 26, 2011 at 8:37 PM

    That is an interesting question in the end.. good read!

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  2. VarshuOctober 27, 2011 at 10:46 AM

    Thank you KP :)

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  3. AnonymousOctober 27, 2011 at 7:33 PM

    Lovely poem! :)

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  4. HAPPINESS!! EVERY MOMENTOctober 27, 2011 at 9:43 PM

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  5. VarshuOctober 27, 2011 at 9:44 PM

    @Bagya : Thank you for the love :)

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  6. Kiran @ KiranTarun.comOctober 28, 2011 at 3:09 AM

    Lovely and emotional poem. BTW, Happy Diwali :)

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  7. VarshuOctober 28, 2011 at 7:06 AM

    Thank you Kiran. Wish you the same :)

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  8. bemoneyawareOctober 28, 2011 at 11:45 AM

    Beautiful poem and my answer to the question posed is that it is both of you for tali do haatoin se hi bajti hai(you need two hands to clap)

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  9. VarshuOctober 28, 2011 at 9:59 PM

    @bemoneyaware: Thank you for an interesting answer :)

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  10. MadhuNovember 2, 2011 at 10:10 AM

    Hey this is quite different thoughts de. Lovely one :)

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  11. VarshuNovember 2, 2011 at 10:54 AM

    @Madhu: Thank you :) :) :)

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  12. Rajendra raikwarDecember 5, 2011 at 3:16 PM

    Very nice

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